Fiction Fun

More Fiction Fun

Another link up with the Trifecta challenge, this time a 33 word story about a “giant leap” in honor of the moon landing anniversary…

Birds warbled in the darkness.  A single bag was draped over her, its strap pressed into her chest alongside the sleeping bundle.  She closed the storm door gingerly, silently.  With faith she leapt.

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8 thoughts on “More Fiction Fun

    1. This reminds me of:

      “Wednesday morning at five o’clock as the day begins
      Silently closing her bedroom door
      Leaving the note that she hoped would say more
      She goes down the stairs to the kitchen clutching her handkerchief
      Quietly turning the backdoor key
      Stepping outside she is free.”

  1. I liked reading the different ideas in the comments and enjoyed JQ’s perspective, but am getting more of a feeling of freedom, of slipping out unnoticed. Thanks for linking up. please come on back for the longer challenge this week.

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